Matt Bellamy

I love the first stanza of this. The imagery is great, and I love the tone of the poem. One thing I would say is that "Away from me, go," ...

An error comes up when I try to go to the advertising and info for usergroups forum, same error as Via said above.

Yay! Thanks, Nate.

My happy place is giving me an error. :( (Same one as Grif describes below)

Ari, you have, like, perfect teeth. *steals*

Poopy hag! Poopy hag! *points and laughs*

I thought I would put off writing on here until I have something profound to say, but I fear that day might never come. :lol: So instead, I will thank ...

From serious to goofy in three steps:

Not as good as some of your other work, and really, you normally paint such a picture in my head, I am a fan. But this seemed more like a ...

Well, it started off sounding rather cliché, a little forced rhyming, but it got better as it went on. The end was much better, good imagery, fast paced. Not bad.

Hmm, I thought I had commented on this before, but apparently not. An excellent poem, great imagery. Not too long either, a little longer and it probably would have been. ...

The first one doesn't seem to have much of a chin. He looks somewhat alarmed, also. Love the parrot, great detail, great colour.

This sounds really great in my head. Particularly the last stanza - great imagery, sounds wonderful. The last line, as well. Sorry this comment isn't overly helpful :P But good ...

Congratulations, JC. Best of luck to you both :)

Oh noes, I'm too old! XD Not that I would enter, but that just made me feel old :P